After reviewing the feedback from my first elevator pitch, I learned that I needed to be much more confident in my delivery. I believe that this elevator pitch is slightly better than the first because I feel like I was more confident in my idea and my delivery.
Your delivery was very good and I could definitely tell that you put time in to your preparation. You seemed confident and well spoken. I really liked your idea because I am one of those people who is much more comfortable taking a traditional pen and paper exam. I think many students would be very willing to use this service. Check out my blog when you get a chance, http://chrispate25.blogspot.com/2016/02/week-7-elevator-pitch-no-2.html.
I did not see your other elevator pitch, but I could see that you were very confident in your delivery in this video. If I was an investor I think that I would want to know more about you because I was able to connect to that situation with the proctor-U exams. One thing I think you could do that might make it even more effective is paint a picture of how horrible online exams are in your pitch. Great job! If you want to check out my blog, here is my link: http://derekfoster321.blogspot.com/2016/02/week-7-elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Great job with your elevator pitch and I agree that you were more confident this time around. You've definitely made some improvements as far as displaying that confidence but I also recommend maybe even writing a script as to avoid any possible filler words or even statements cause that causes the pitch to lose it's natural flow. Otherwise good job! Here's mine if you'd want to check it out: http://entreprevision.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Your Pitch was great! It sounded like you had put a lot of time into preparing for the second pitch. I really enjoyed hearing this pitch because I know how terrible Proctor U can be. (Terrible being a massive understatement). I definitely support your idea & hope this is somehow implemented.
Tristan,
ReplyDeleteYour delivery was very good and I could definitely tell that you put time in to your preparation. You seemed confident and well spoken. I really liked your idea because I am one of those people who is much more comfortable taking a traditional pen and paper exam. I think many students would be very willing to use this service. Check out my blog when you get a chance, http://chrispate25.blogspot.com/2016/02/week-7-elevator-pitch-no-2.html.
Tristan,
ReplyDeleteI did not see your other elevator pitch, but I could see that you were very confident in your delivery in this video. If I was an investor I think that I would want to know more about you because I was able to connect to that situation with the proctor-U exams. One thing I think you could do that might make it even more effective is paint a picture of how horrible online exams are in your pitch. Great job! If you want to check out my blog, here is my link:
http://derekfoster321.blogspot.com/2016/02/week-7-elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Tristan!
ReplyDeleteGreat job with your elevator pitch and I agree that you were more confident this time around. You've definitely made some improvements as far as displaying that confidence but I also recommend maybe even writing a script as to avoid any possible filler words or even statements cause that causes the pitch to lose it's natural flow. Otherwise good job! Here's mine if you'd want to check it out: http://entreprevision.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Heya!
ReplyDeleteYour Pitch was great! It sounded like you had put a lot of time into preparing for the second pitch. I really enjoyed hearing this pitch because I know how terrible Proctor U can be. (Terrible being a massive understatement). I definitely support your idea & hope this is somehow implemented.
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